{"id":2280,"date":"2007-10-23T11:41:00","date_gmt":"2007-10-23T11:41:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/writingya.com\/?p=2280"},"modified":"2018-11-20T05:27:40","modified_gmt":"2018-11-20T05:27:40","slug":"showing-vs-telling-process-meaning","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/writingya.com\/?p=2280","title":{"rendered":"Showing vs. Telling, Process &#038; Meaning"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img decoding=\"async\" style=\"width: 430px; height: 322px;\" src=\"http:\/\/farm3.static.flickr.com\/2044\/1522573567_4c109d9a5e.jpg?v=0\" align=\"left\" hspace=\"10\" \/>When I have a bit of story being looked over by my stalwart writing group, I at times have a rare &#8220;Aha!&#8221; moment that I am spending a lot of my time explaining my plot to my compatriots. That&#8217;s a key moment for me to realize that obviously I didn&#8217;t <i>write<\/i> what I meant.<\/p>\n<p>Though I hate it when my editor says it, the Show-Don&#8217;t-Tell school of writing rules state that you allow readers to see what you have to say, and gather meaning from the array of options you&#8217;ve given them. In this way, the reading is interactive, and the reader brings something to the book. If you don&#8217;t allow your readers this connection, you&#8217;ve generally written a very predictable, dull book that will be put down halfway through the first chapter because credible storylines don&#8217;t spring to life just because the narrator tells us they&#8217;re credible. Our intellect has to engage and convince us to suspend our disbelief, and enter into the plot.<\/p>\n<p>Which brings me to my picture, taken the first week I was in the UK. I took this with my camera phone, standing on an island in the middle of the street. &#8220;Oh, look,&#8221; I gushed. &#8220;A little book maker. Is that how they do independent press here? I wonder if they print poetry chapbooks.&#8221; <i>Snap<\/i>.<\/p>\n<p>Um, no. <i>Bookmaking:<\/i> as in <i><b>gambling.<\/b><\/i> Welcome, oh, wet-behind-the-ears-one, to the UK&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t know what the moral of my story is except that what works in writing (hey &#8211; I was extrapolating meaning, here!) doesn&#8217;t always work in life.<\/p>\n<p><b>Jules posed a &#8220;<a href=\"http:\/\/blaine.org\/sevenimpossiblethings\/?p=956\" target=\"_blank\">brief and burning question<\/a>&#8220;<\/b> to writers about the nature of process. Does it exist? Apparently, Rosemary Wells says that any good writer will tell you that process <i>doesn&#8217;t<\/i> exist.<\/p>\n<p>Hm.<br \/>This strikes me as a little funny because when I was speaking to undergraduates at my alma mater, my professor asked me to talk to the students about process. Swaggering fresh from my&#8230; um, folly? after my first publication, I said confidently (<i>disingenuously!<\/i>)that really, process <i>didn&#8217;t<\/i> exist. That I <i>didn&#8217;t<\/i> write everyday. That I <i>didn&#8217;t<\/i> do all of the proscribed things that other authors did. And look! I sold stuff! Wasn&#8217;t I smart? Sadly, no. I was delusional, and I wanted everyone to believe I was brilliant, and I was terrified &#8212; and quite sure &#8212; that I was not.<\/p>\n<p>Fact: There is not ONE process that exists that everyone has to use &#8212; we know that from listening to the way Tamora Pierce says she worked, or Walter Dean Meyers said he worked this summer at <a href=\"http:\/\/scbwi.org\/\" target=\"_blank\">the SCBWI<\/a> L.A. Conference. I couldn&#8217;t work the way either one of them works, but the way I work&#8230; works for me. Therefore: there <i>IS<\/i> such a thing as process. But it changes daily, and it differs wildly. And when you add a readers, in the form of a writing group and\/or an editor, it shifts again. Your process has to work for you for the particular piece you&#8217;re working on, the particular tone you&#8217;re going for, etc. etc. etc. &#8212; or it&#8217;s worthless. And you cannot hold onto a process that is a tried-and-true work of art for Mr. Meyers or Lady Pierce, or Our Jane or anybody else &#8212; your process has to be for you, and it&#8217;s not something to shine up and show off. It&#8217;s a work thing, a work ethic, and it&#8217;s kind of &#8230;personal.<\/p>\n<p>Those are my \u00a3.02 centavos.<\/p>\n<p>Speaking of Our Jane (and also thanks to <i>Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast<\/i> for this), she&#8217;s chatting with Anne Levy at <a href=\"http:\/\/dadtalk.typepad.com\/book_buds_kidlit_reviews\/2007\/10\/a-qa-with-jane-.html\" target=\"_blank\">BookBuds<\/a> about judging a contest where kids <i>write their own alphabet books<\/i> (take THAT Steve Martin). Go ye.<\/p>\n<p>The <a href=\"http:\/\/dadtalk.typepad.com\/cybils\/\" target=\"_blank\">Cybils nominations<\/a> continue (and if you haven&#8217;t dropped by to nominate a single book in each category, what&#8217;s stopping you?). I&#8217;m looking forward to reading <i>Extras<\/i>, the newest Scott Westerfeld. Via <i><a href=\"http:\/\/www.gailgauthier.com\/blogger.html\" target=\"_blank\">Original Content<\/a><\/i>, I&#8217;ve discovered a great piece on Westerfeld, <a href=\"http:\/\/seattlepi.nwsource.com\/lifestyle\/336024_uglies19.html\" target=\"_blank\">and on the dystopian novel plot being increasingly accepted as upcoming reality<\/a>. Teens interviewed remark on the artificiality and surreality of the society in which they live, and discuss the rise of the famous-for-being-famous tribe. Some interesting stuff.<\/p>\n<p>Today&#8217;s writing thought, sent to me by my thoughtful friend, L.:<\/p>\n<p><i style=\"color: rgb(51, 204, 0);\">&#8220;I have found that I&#8217;m not as good as I thought or as bad as I feared.  I am not heroine or villain.  I am living with my actual self and seeing what that is.  Neither idealizing nor being idealized.  It is more painful than I had imagined.<\/p>\n<p>Also more dimensional.  I find myself stumbling hand in hand with forgiveness as a much closer entity.&#8221;<\/i> &#8211; Sark <\/p>\n<p>Usually I find Sark pretty (painfully) airy, but this quote really brings home to me how writing &#8211; for any age group &#8211; has to be done from a place of honest and feet-on-the-ground centeredness. 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